The story of Patrick, Edna, and Jane
This is such a vivid story-- you make your family into characters!
(Btw my grandmother was a comptometer operator in Chicago in the 20s! A forgotten technology-- )
I love your writing style! It’s so succinct but it draws rich details! Nice job!
Thank you. It’s always a challenge to find the right details when telling a life story, isn’t it?
It’s hard to master!
This is such a vivid story-- you make your family into characters!
(Btw my grandmother was a comptometer operator in Chicago in the 20s! A forgotten technology-- )
I love your writing style! It’s so succinct but it draws rich details! Nice job!
Thank you. It’s always a challenge to find the right details when telling a life story, isn’t it?
It’s hard to master!